Monday, 8 April 2019

If I had wings

For the past few weeks we have been doing poetry. This weeks task was a poem about If I Had Wings... First we had to answer some questions and then we had to colour in the piece of paper with the poem. Last of all we had to write our own If I Had Wings poem. We had to use sticky ( interesting ) language, use the five senses and use interesting verbs and nouns. Here is my poem.
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  1. Anonymous11 April 2019 at 14:29

    Hi Jordan. I really enjoyed reading your poem with you. It was great to see you used the senses and some interesting language. My favourite line is,'If I had wings I would watch the Earth spin clockwise from the peaceful moon.' This line had a wonderful sense of imagination. I was pleased that you went back and changed you last line to suit the rest of the poem.

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  2. Jordyn26 June 2019 at 18:55

    This is so nice Jordy you crack me up kid

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  3. Anonymous2 July 2019 at 13:55

    Thanks dad 😄

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