This is the 2nd day of the summer learning journey and this is the 2nd piece I have bone today I had to portend that I was the person that toke the first step on the moon and right a poem about it
My name is Allie and I am part of the SLJ team. What a great poem that you have written for us all to read. Great work. If I had to write about how I felt when I landed on the moon I think I would be nervous but excited. I wonder just what it would be like? Scary to I think. Would you like to go to the moon? At one stage there was talk about being able to buy a ticket to go on a rocket to the moon, just like buying a plane ticket. It was really expensive though! You would have to have a lot of money!!
Keep up the great work Jordan, it is great to read all of your posts. I look forward to reading more over the summer.
Hi this is Jordyn thanks for reading y work and noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo I would hate to go to the moon become I hate the dark and the thing of being on the moon and outer space is wired bye thanks for commenting on my blog
Hi Jordyn
ReplyDeleteMy name is Allie and I am part of the SLJ team. What a great poem that you have written for us all to read. Great work.
If I had to write about how I felt when I landed on the moon I think I would be nervous but excited.
I wonder just what it would be like? Scary to I think.
Would you like to go to the moon?
At one stage there was talk about being able to buy a ticket to go on a rocket to the moon, just like buying a plane ticket. It was really expensive though! You would have to have a lot of money!!
Keep up the great work Jordan, it is great to read all of your posts. I look forward to reading more over the summer.
Until next time
Allie :)
Hi this is Jordyn thanks for reading y work and noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo I would hate to go to the moon become I hate the dark and the thing of being on the moon and outer space is wired bye thanks for commenting on my blog
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