This is the 5th day of the summer learning journey and this is the 2nd piece of work I have done today we had to lesine to a store about a swimmer named Yarsra and her story and then go to her website and read her storey and then writhe write them here is my work
Hi Jordyn
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Isn't it great that after someone has gone through so much can then go on to something like the Olympics and do really well. Even though she didn't get a medal, just to be there is amazing.
I really hope that she is able to go to the Olympics in Japan later this year. That would be great.
She has been very brave to be able to stand up in front of world leaders and lots of different people to talk to them about all the issues that she feels so strongly about.
What a role model she is!
Remember when you are writing a big piece of writing to use full stops and put your work into sentences. Then into paragraphs. It makes it so much easier to read.
Good work Jordyn
Until next time
Allie :)