Hi there Jordyn, I really like that you've included how long you went to the beach and how much rubbish you have found all together.You described how the net looked in an interesting way.
Hi Porsha I am Jordyn from Karoro School and I really like your positive thoughtful comment, it made me feel good that you liked my post and how I put all the things in order and how I described the net.
Hi Ayah I am Jordyn from Karoro School. Thank you for your comment. It is nice of you to tell me what I should do to improve my writing, so thank you for that. Next time I will look at your blog and give you a comment.
Hi there Jordyn, I really like that you've included how long you went to the beach and how much rubbish you have found all together.You described how the net looked in an interesting way.
ReplyDeleteHi Porsha I am Jordyn from Karoro School and I really like your positive thoughtful comment, it made me feel good that you liked my post and how I put all the things in order and how I described the net.
ReplyDeleteHi Jorden its Ayah from Karoro School. I really like it but you could add a bit more writing but apart from that I like it.
ReplyDeleteHi Ayah I am Jordyn from Karoro School. Thank you for your comment. It is nice of you to tell me what I should do to improve my writing, so thank you for that. Next time I will look at your blog and give you a comment.
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