Hi Jordyn its Breanna from Karoro School. Your writing is so cool, but I don't think you proof cheeked it because you put crcher untested of creature or something 😄 otherwise it is awesome.
Hi Jordyn my name is Emma and I go to Karoro School. I really like your descriptive language. Maybe you should check it because I found some spelling errors. It was a good story. 😀😊
Hi Emma I am Jordyn and I am really sorry that I have so many spelling errors in my withing and next time I will make share that there are no spelling errors in my next writing.Your comment was so helpful and nice and it made me feel happy that you looked at my work😀 Thank you for the comment.
Hi Jordyn its Breanna from Karoro School. Your writing is so cool, but I don't think you proof cheeked it because you put crcher untested of creature or something 😄 otherwise it is awesome.
ReplyDeleteHI Breanna I am Jordyn from Karoro school and your comment is nice and helpful😇and makes me feel good about my work 👍 so thank you for that comment.
DeleteHi Jordyn my name is Emma and I go to Karoro School. I really like your descriptive language. Maybe you should check it because I found some spelling errors. It was a good story. 😀😊
ReplyDeleteHi Emma I am Jordyn and I am really sorry that I have so many spelling errors in my withing and next time I will make share that there are no spelling errors in my next writing.Your comment was so helpful and nice and it made me feel happy that you looked at my work😀 Thank you for the comment.
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