Tēnā koe Jordyn. It is great to see you could use your writing skills and drawing skills to share your learning about wharenui. Your diagram was impressive and I know if you had had more time you would have loved to have finished off the beautiful designs you were doing.
It was good to see that you broke your writing into two paragraphs with the first one explaining the structure of and wharenui and the second paragraph explaining why wharenui are important.
I want you to keep working on reading your sentences carefully and checking that they make sense. Ka pai ō tuhituhi.
Tēnā koe Jordyn. It is great to see you could use your writing skills and drawing skills to share your learning about wharenui. Your diagram was impressive and I know if you had had more time you would have loved to have finished off the beautiful designs you were doing.
ReplyDeleteIt was good to see that you broke your writing into two paragraphs with the first one explaining the structure of and wharenui and the second paragraph explaining why wharenui are important.
I want you to keep working on reading your sentences carefully and checking that they make sense. Ka pai ō tuhituhi.