This I the secede piece of work I have done on day one for the summer learning journey here is my work on if you hade to sale the 7 seas what food would you bring with out refrigeration
Welcome to the Summer Learning Journey. My name is Allie and I am part of the team that will be reading your blog over the summer You have made a great start to the programme with you list of items that you would take with you on your voyage.
It is great that you have given a great reason for taking each one too. You have thought about it and got lots of different things on your list. You might want to take some water also. As you will need something to drink and possibly cook with too.
Next time you could just list the items underneath one another as this would make the list easier to read. But you have done a great job Jordyn. I am really looking forward to reading more of your work over the summer.
Hi Allie this is Jordyn I just what to say thanks for commenting on my blog and I will next time take on your rightist and make my work better I was a onier to have you comment on my blog thank you aging
Hi Jordyn
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the Summer Learning Journey. My name is Allie and I am part of the team that will be reading your blog over the summer
You have made a great start to the programme with you list of items that you would take with you on your voyage.
It is great that you have given a great reason for taking each one too. You have thought about it and got lots of different things on your list. You might want to take some water also. As you will need something to drink and possibly cook with too.
Next time you could just list the items underneath one another as this would make the list easier to read.
But you have done a great job Jordyn. I am really looking forward to reading more of your work over the summer.
Enjoy the beginning of the holidays
Until next time
Allie :)
Hi Allie this is Jordyn I just what to say thanks for commenting on my blog and I will next time take on your rightist and make my work better I was a onier to have you comment on my blog thank you aging
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